Friday, February 01, 2008

Maan kehti hai !!!!

This is a small poem i wrote for my little cute niece, she has a competition in her school to recite a poem with actions. I really could not make out how this is, so put it up here on the blog. The best place for opinions to pour in...hope this is liked by the readers..

Maan kehti hai, main unki pari hoon…

Meri aankhen timtimaati hain,

Meri baatein unhein hasaanti hain

Mujhe lori suna ke woh sulati hai

Ek pappi deke subah uthaati hai

Mujhe jo acha lage woh banaati hai

Pehle mujhe khilaati hai, phir khaati hai

Meri khuhsi ke liye, ghoda banti hai

Mere liye kisi se bhi ladti hai

Subah se sham woh mera khayaal rakhti hai

Mere sapnon ke liye, woh mehnat karti hai

Meri hansi se uska din ban jaata hai

Mujhmain unhe apna bachpan nazar aata hai

Maan kehti hai, main unki pari hoon

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

kavita mien bhaav to bahut hai..but kahin lay (rhyme) toot rahee hai..I know u can do much better but good capture of feelings especially for a daughter..

Anonymous said...

awesome poem dost!
emotions can not take better words than these :)

Witty Atharva said...

Hey it is very nice....it made me remind of my Mom....
Love u Mom!!!